Into the Wind

This is my version of Into the Wind. I recognize I've taken an example from B1A4's album title but hey! Free World! Anyway, I know it doesn't sound great and doesn't expresses what I wanted to because I have a shitty recorder. I know some parts sound like I've played them from 10000 km afar and some parts sound very high and go from normal tone to pitch tone. Sorry but I seriously can't find a good recorder. However, I would be very thrilled if you would give a listen to it and if you want tell me your opinion, be it bad or good. I really work hard as a soon-to-be composer.